Here it is (Btw it’s very loud in this video compared to how it plays in game. Turn your volume way down for the authentic experience.)
Hey! I know this is a bit of an unconventional one but bare with me!
So a few years ago I was on my phone and found this creepypasta reading, but since that day I've been unable to find the creepypasta at all! Though I remember good chunks of the story and what it was about.
So it starts with two men (I'm assuming government agents or something simmilar) conversing about a woman who wrote down her experiences with something that happened to her. The lady worked in a nursing home, and apparently was being hunted down by this creature. The reasoning I cant remember, but what I do remember is that the lady had the ability to hop between what i'm assuming are dimensions. This skill was called "climbing", and only a select amount of people were able to do this. She was told this info by another being that didn't speak that great english, and told her that if the creature got her and ate her she would, quite literally, be erased from all existance. No person would remember her, and all things she did would automatically be gone.
Towards the end, she ends up "climbing" to another dimension where it's mentioned her outfit does look like a police officers. She ends up in a girls room with either one or two young girls questioning why she's there. It ends with the two men at the start talking about the situation, but one of them mentions how the files of her were suddenly gone. Throughout the story there was mention of an old lady getting a fit of crazy, and some phrase repeated over and over: new odor a god (I only know how to spell it phonetically, so sorry on that front).
Then she ripped it in half and said, “Never mind, it’s tearable.”
I feel like I’ve succeeded as a dad.
I vaguely remember this creepypasta about a man who paid another man to pull his teeth out. After the teeth are gone the man puts brown recluses from a shoebox in his mouth. I think MrCreepyPasta read it. Thank you, if you find it.
This is a website with user-submitted stories that presents itself as nonfiction, and each story, given an identification number that posits it as part of a larger project (a secrets database from a government entity, etc), tells a story about an unusual sci-fi-ish occurance (if I am recalling correctly).
There's a lot of great horror up here, great fresh stuff. As a professional writer and narrator of horror, of my own making and others, I'd like to point out one little thing that I notice a lot with writers on here, and it's so simple to fix that I'm sure it might help just to point it out so writers can better edit their own work prior to posting.
I could go on about show vs tell, paragraph structure, spelling and grammar, all important things. But as a narrator, this particular issue is one that I find myself correcting during the "adaptation to audio drama" and so far I've never had a writer complain that I did this.
It's simple. Watch repeating descriptors. You may not notice because you're staring at the material for hours and hours before you finish it, but readers definitely pick up on it. If you're not sure what I mean, here is an example I've made up.
"She hit the smelly pit and fell inside. The wall of the smelly pit was soft and started caving in. She struggled, pushing back at the smelly pit until her hands bled. The smelly pit consumed her."
Now that's pretty blatant. But it's just an example. 'Smelly pit" over and over. Using the same word or phrase again and again (even twice is too much, if they're too close together). It's like a dull hammer banging your sense of enjoyment. It also creates a terribly obvious "speed bump" when you're narrating.
I have no specific writer in mind. This is not a personal slam on anyone. I'm just throwing it here in the interest of seeing better, more skillfully crafted stories, not as a critique for anyone in particular. There are many good writers contributing to these forums.
Take care all. Keep writing awesome fucking horror, everyone!
He said. “Sorry. That was a long winded story.”
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But then I screwed up.
Hi! I used to work a boring desk job a few years back and spent most of my time reading creepypastas. I read so many that sometimes I remember the story but can’t remember the name. Here’s the story in as much detail as I remember, TL;DR at the bottom if you’re not tryna read all this!!
These high school kids (let’s call them Tim & Paul, I don’t remember their names) are friends and after school they play video games at Paul’s house. This is because Tim’s parents are super protective and enforce a bedtime, check in on the kids to make sure the game isn’t violent, etc etc. Paul’s parents don’t really care what they do.
So one day they’re playing a game (call of duty I think?? Something with fighting) and some random gamer points out that Tim and Paul are exceptional at the game and if they would like, there’s a video game currently still being tested and it’s really difficult/scary, but if they’re not wimps they should play. Tim’s a little hesitant but Paul’s into it, so after school on the way home they follow this anonymous gamer’s instructions and pick up the game by visiting a really sketchy local house. I think it was abandoned but I don’t remember?? Anyway they pick up the game and bring it to Paul’s house.
The game loads up and it’s kinda like a spooky rpg. Other kids are in the game and they get some missions. They start playing and every time they finish a level, one character dies or is eliminated. They’re enjoying it but at some point, they have to stop playing because Tim has to go home.
When he gets home, his tv turns on and it looks like the game is already loaded onto whatever console he uses and he’s like “what??” But he sits down to play anyway. Paul’s character is still in the game so Tim sees that he’s playing, but in this level, Paul’s character dies. The next day Tim goes to school and Paul’s not there. Tim stops playing the game for a little bit, Paul goes missing-Tim’s a little freaked out.
The game starts appearing on other devices like Tim’s computer and stuff, telling him to come back and play. He does, and as he plays and interacts with the other characters, he finds out that they’re other kids who found the game in the same way. Many of them confirm that when you lose the game, you go “missing” and Tim freaks out because now he realizes you either play this game or die.
He keeps playing and ends up getting super competitive with one of the players. He doesn’t want to die so he’s trying his best to get through the game
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The "twist" is that the noises are actually a rock being pushed against the wall, and the main characters friend gets trapped under the rock to slowly wait for his death.
I'm struggling to remember the name for this thing, it's like a creepy pasta but in real life. Kind of like what happened with Marina Joyce where people were speculating that she had been kidnapped or something. The kind of thing where there's random youtube videos uploaded with riddles/hints in the title or the video length of something that all adds up to another video that can convict them of murder or something. Its basically a real life mystery story type of deal and I can't remember the term for it. Any help would be appreciated. Thank you.
